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#HistFicThursdays - Death and The Poet by Fiona Forsyth - Guest Post

  For today's #HistFicThursdays blog, I am so excited to be welcoming  Fiona Forsyth  to the blog with a guest post about her new book  Death and The Poet ,   as part of her  Coffee Pot Book Club  tour. Her fabulous guest post discusses the book's setting, moving away from the perception of Ancient Rome to its reality with just enough artistic license to keep readers deeply engaged with the story. But first, let's meet the book... Blurb 14 AD. When Dokimos the vegetable seller is found bludgeoned to death in the Black Sea town of Tomis, it’s the most exciting thing to have happened in the region for years. Now reluctantly settled into life in exile, the disgraced Roman poet Ovid helps his friend Avitius to investigate the crime, with the evidence pointing straight at a cuckolded neighbour. But Ovid is also on edge, waiting for the most momentous death of all. Augustus, the first Emperor of Rome, is nearing his end, and the future of the whole Roman wor...

#MGMonday Characters: The Mentor

I'm afraid that today was another forgetting-it-was-Monday day! It's the May Day Bank Holiday, meaning I'm off work so naturally, I've been spending the entire day thinking it was Sunday.

So I've had to quickly put together my notes for this blog, which is all about the Mentor Character in a middle grade novel. But first...

What is the Mentor Character?

This character's primary job is to teach and guide the protagonist until the time comes when they can stand on their own two feet. This could involve teaching them magical abilities, or lending a listening ear when it's needed. It could be a family member, or a friend of the family's, or a guide to another land... The possibilities are endless (just be aware of stranger danger!)

Do all Middle Grade Books Need a Mentor Character?

No, not at all. But, if you have a bunch of kids running around on adventures, the authorities are going to start asking questions sooner or later. A mentor offers the opportunity to get rid of this nuisance plot feature. In Heartstone, Ben's grandad acts as the boys' mentor for the first part of the book. This means that, as an adult, he can also act as a chauffeur as the plot requires the two boys to find their way around remote, ruined castles. Without the grandad, I would have had a problem getting them to where they should be.

Does a Mentor Need to be Old?

Honestly, no, but it's easier if they're an adult. Children are used to adults assuming the mentor role, so it would seem as unusual for them as if another kid decides they know so much more about what's happening. As I mentioned before, too, adults can also bring some other skills to the table, like a driver's license!

What are the Cons of Having a Mentor Character?

Mentor characters are great and I would always have one in a middle grade novel, especially if it's the first in a series. However, there are a couple of pitfalls to be aware of...

Firstly, no one knows everything. It's important for your Mentor to have moments of weakness and doubt. Otherwise, why are they not going on the adventure and leaving the kids in a safe place? Make sure you include your Mentor's shortcomings in your plan.

Secondly, the Mentor makes things too easy for your characters. You need to get rid of them part way through the book. You could kill them off (although be careful as this can be quite predictable and cliched) or incapacitate them in some other way. Back to Heartstone... Ben's Grandad is unable to help them after a certain point because something happens to him that prevents him from helping. No spoilers here, though!


That said, however, I would recommend you include a Mentor in your plan, especially if it's a standalone or first in a series. They can offer a lot of insight and make things much easier for you as an author.


If your interested in reading more about the Mentor Character, I wrote blog a hundred years ago about Gandalf's role in Lord of the Rings, which you can find here.


Happy Writing! :)

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