Kay Harker and Cole Hawlings Picture accessed via BBC There are few things more Christmassy than the opening few bars of the theme tune to The Box of Delights . In fact, the tune is based on Victor Hely-Hutchinson's Carol Symphony and had been used in radio adaptations of the same novel years earlier than the 1984 television series. Clearly, everyone already knew that you just couldn't improve on that sound to evoke the magic of Christmas which - for me and for many - is so wonderfully explored in John Masefield's story. As a viewer, one of the things I enjoy most about the television series of The Box of Delights is the acting. Child actors are precarious things: too sweet and they're almost unbearable to watch, not sweet enough and they're unbelievable. They must walk that fine line between the two, and it is a perilous one! Most young actors fall into the first category, where their on-screen presence is almost dangerously saccharine. Not so the child actors ...
Saturday 23rd November - Characters - Part Four – Conflicts
On Scrivener – my writing programme of choice – two of the headings on the character sketch pages is for internal and external conflicts. This is so important and will tell your readers all they need to know about the defining behaviours of your characters. You can take this as literally as you like.
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| Smiling on the outside, what conflicts are on the inside? |
Back when Facebook was still young (and I was much younger!), all those quizzes to find which character in X series you were most
like were about the coolest thing you could do, they could have been summed up
in two questions. What are your internal
conflicts? and What are your external conflicts? If you could match these two questions to a character,
you were definitely the most like them, never mind your eye colour or favourite
animal.
In writing, outward conflicts are the easiest to convey. Character A dislikes B because of C. These show clear signs to the reader through
the POV narrator, by their actions or words. It’s harder with internal conflicts. After all, all of your characters have them but, mostly, we don’t write
from all points of view...
So here are a few things to think about in securing your
characters’ conflicts:
- Only certain people say what they think – while this is the easiest way to disclose to your reader what inner conflicts your character is suffering, there are better, and more believable, ways to demonstrate this. Someone who is chronically shy is not going to announce to a full room that they’re feeling nervous!
- Conflicts are the gears of your character – every crucial moment in any story comes from a personal conflict of one of the characters coming to light. Your story grows in pace and involvement every time you use them.
- No one likes an infallible hero – you may think you do, but actually true heroics come from conquering conflicts rather than having none in the first place.
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