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#HistFicThursdays - Time, time, time...

This week, we finally managed to install our new (not new ) item of furniture - a mid-18th Century grandfather clock. It's not bright and shiny like more modern ones, but a dark oak with a warm patina which the beeswax polish is drawing out. In order to set it up, we had to do a certain amount of research - how to hang the pendulum, where the weight went on the endless chain - and it got me thinking... where and when did certain divisions of time come from? The time periods which I have written either had household clocks or didn't, I have not written novels from the time of their invention. Clocks have been around for a long time, and the obsession with measuring time in an ordered fashion dates back to at least  the ancient Sumerians. It was they who established a circular reading of time and, I imagine, the sixty seconds/minutes came about as much because it was an easy way to divide a circle as anything else. But it wasn't until much later that the precision of seconds ...

NaNoWriMo Day 15 - Choosing Your First Reader

Thursday 15th November - Choosing Your First Reader

Some of us write books we never intend the world to see.  Writing for yourself is absolutely fine, but many of us like to imagine someone reading our books.  Sometimes we dream of hitting the Bestseller List, which everyone queuing down the street on release day, or sometimes we imagine our books in the hands of a certain someone.



Whichever the dream, your First Reader will most likely be someone different, but their role is nonetheless important.  Your First Reader will be someone who you have to convince, but also someone you trust.  They should at least have an appreciation of the style and genre in which you're writing, but they don't have to be avid readers of it.

Here are a few things to consider when choosing your first reader:

  1. Trust - This is the *most* important thing.  When sharing a manuscript, you're opening a little window onto your soul.  All writers, whatever they claim, but an element of themselves into their writing.  You need to know your first reader won't call into question yourself through your writing.
  2. Confidentiality - Sure, you want them to tell people about this amazing book you gave them to read, but at the same time you don't want them to blab about plot spoilers and the like.
  3. Suitability - Find a reader with an interest in your book.  They don't have to be the target audience, but they do have to be engaged.
  4. Constructive Criticism - I'm going to argue a slightly contentious idea here... If your First Reader returns with no suggestions, they probably weren't the right person to choose!  That's not to say you have to take on board their suggestions, but you want to know they've engaged enough to have formed their own opinions.  When I sent my first book to my First Reader I enclosed a little notebook for her feedback.  Some of it I acted on, some of it I chose to leave.
  5. Edit First - Don't expect your First Reader to be an editor or a proofreader - they're in it for the story!  Make sure you've done *at least* a read through to catch any of the obvious typos and grammatical issues.

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